“How many cherries do you think you
can fit in your mouth?” I said as
the antagonist.
“More than you,” Jack, my younger
brother, sneered back. He was
notorious for his big mouth.
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Taken After the Contest. Pictured from Left to Right: Shoshana, Ellen (Me), Jack, Colleen, Drew. |
We were standing between rows of a
cherry orchard in Frankfort, Michigan. My mom dragged us out of Crystal Lake, into the car
and out to the cherry orchard for a family outing. While my mother was away filling up her gallon milk jug of
cherries, Jack and I were standing under Montmorency tart cherry trees with our
empty gallons by our feet. I
reached up in a bunch of cherries, picked the stems off and started popping
them in my mouth – one, two, three, four, five. Jack looked at me and started in on his own bunch. The first twenty were easy. I guess we both have really big
mouths. By number twenty-five, I
was bending over drooling with my rest of my family circled around us, half
cheering, half scolding but mostly disgusted. By number twenty-eight, I was tucking each cherry into my
lips being careful not to choke.
Twenty-nine. Thirty. I started laughing. Jack was still on twenty-five. I managed to fit a thirty-first cherry
in. Jack fit in his
twenty-sixth. We were both
laughing and drooling. I reached
up for another cherry, blindly. If
I stood up I would choke. I
couldn’t stop giggling. Jack
started laughing, too. I watched
him pull back his lip and tuck the twenty-seventh cherry in. He started laughing and coughing and a
cherry pie filling came pouring out of his mouth. I turned away, pushed my thirty- second cherry in, put my
hands over my head like a champion and spit all my cherries out, too.
The Cherry Hut, Beulah, MI |
We’ve never been civilized around
cherries. They are seductive –
red, sweet and juicy. And since we
were up north, no one asked us to be civilized. The same seductive quality to the cherries sells cherry
pies. There’s never left over
pies. The place to buy cherries
pies Up North is the Cherry Hut.
Famous for their cherry pies the Cherry Hut opened as a stand in 1922 on
the north shore of Crystal Lake.
The stand sold pies, jams, and jellies, all family recipes. In 1935 it moved to its present day
location in on highway 31, a two-lane winding road that follows lake Michigan
all the way up the Lower Peninsula.
As a car passes though Beulah, the Cherry Hut’s iconic Jerry Cherry “the
smiling pie faced boy” welcomes you to the red and white painted building. Everything is red and white, the
awnings over of the outdoor seating, the flowers baskets hanging out side and
the vintage style uniform of the servers.
Red and white decorations aside, the business is cherries. There are, of course, cherry pies, but
also cherry burgers, cherry chicken salad, cherryade, and cherry frozen
yogurt. Andy Case, the owner,
estimates the cherry hut uses about 3000 lbs of cherries a week, baking more
than 30,000 pies a year. I bet
Jack and I could take those on, if we had the chance.
Cherry Hut Cherry Pies |
This year the cherries we stuffed
into our mouths and into Cherry Hut pies are in jeopardy. Karl Henkel of the Detroit News
reported “80 percent of its tart cherry crop is rippling through
Michigan.” The March warm spell
caused fruit trees to blossom early, but early blossoms froze as temperature
fluctuated. It the Montmorency
tart cherries that the Cherry Hut needs, that are predicted to yield 20 percent
of their regular yield. They are
perfect for pies and cherry mouth-stuffing contests because of their tart
flavor and they are a little bit smaller than the sweet cherries so we could
fit more in our mouths.
“It’s going to be challenging this
year,” says Case. “We have enough
in our own inventory to get us through June. We’ve been doing business for local families for so long. “We got a call last week” from a local
cherry orchard “that said they would assure us cherries for the rest of our
season.” All of the Cherry Hut’s
cherries are local. “They’re all
Benzie, Leelanau, and Grand Traverse cherries,” Case said naming off local
counties. He agreed that the
relationship-based cherry purchasing protects his business, he added that the
“smaller-scale” and the “history helps us out.”
Cherry pies and tradition is
preserved despite the unusual March weather. Celebrate with a cherry pie or a mouth-stuffing contest.
Ellen,
ReplyDeleteI like how familiar you are with the setting and subject in this piece, it makes for a good read. Perhaps try cutting the first couple of paragraphs in the beginning where you describe your family's eating of the cherries. The story really caught my attention when you introduced outside sources other than your family. They made it read like the piece was something other than your account of enjoying cherries. If the end was moved up a bit, I think the piece would be stronger for it. It's clear that you really like your subject, I think you may just need to focus on other people's views of it as well. This is a strong start!
I agree. More scenes and reportage, please! Think about your reader and what we need to know. . . .
ReplyDeleteEllen,
ReplyDeleteYour opening story is quite charming. I wonder at what age this took place. The descriptions of the Cherry Hut are also fun - I laughed aloud at reading about “Jerry Cherry.”
At this point, I don’t see much connection between the Cherry Hut and the opening anecdote other than that they both include cherries and are both “Up North.” You do reference the opening story a few times later in the article, but I think you would be better served to either omit it or to use it to tie in the (seemingly) overall theme of the limit to cherries that will survive in Michigan this year. I think that the story could be really great if you used it to talk about the usual excessiveness of cherries in northern Michigan, and the innocence of having a contest with your younger brother in years past. (Just an idea!)
I think this will be a very cool story when it is completed, I look forward to seeing more information concerning this years cherries and how it has effected you & your family, as well as local hot spots like the Cherry Hut!
Keep Jerry Cherry smiling Michigan!
Steph
I love your intro. I laughed a lot. I liked your "I" voice there, but when you bring yourself into the piece in later paragraphs, I'm not sure it fits. But, I think you will figure it out once you make this piece longer and decide what it's really about. Right now, I'm not sure the direction you're headed. In the end you raise this conflict of a cherry shortage--is this going to be your focus? I'm really interested in reading more about that and how it may speak to a larger issue regarding local food (shortage or not) in Michigan.
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